You and some friends ate a meal at a reataurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter, give details of your visit to the restaurant, explain the reason for the celebration, say what was good about the food and the services.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing a letter in appreciation of about the best event in your cafe. When I decided to celebrate my
parent's
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25th anniversary
so
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I was bewildered
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about where
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I should organise
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function.
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this
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, I don't know the price of the food so one of my friends has recommended booking your cafe.
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, I booked your restaurant for 10 people the
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Sunday.
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, we had no time to prepare different dishes
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you have a variety of food so I opted to book your hotel.
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, my parents like to eat Chinese food and
Belgium
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desserts but it takes hours to make them.
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I
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to organize a party at the restaurant to get
together with
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family and friends. I was so pleased with your arrangements for that anniversary. The well-organized event
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happen
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it
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persuaded me to write a letter of admiration. the special dish we ordered was Gordon Blue and it is not only well-cooked chicken but
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spices were appropriate. I really appreciate your efforts for
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particular event. Best Regards,
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Ensure a clear and logical structure throughout the letter.
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Improve the greeting and closing to be more formal and respectful.
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Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea.
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Provide more specific details and examples when discussing the food and services.
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