You and some friends ate a meal at a reataurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter, give details of your visit to the restaurant, explain the reason for the celebration, say what was good about the food and the services.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing a letter in appreciation of about the best event in your cafe. When I decided to celebrate my

parent's

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25th anniversary

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I was bewildered

where

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about where

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I should organise

this

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function.

Besides

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this

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, I don't know the price of the food so one of my friends has recommended booking your cafe.

However

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, I booked your restaurant for 10 people the

last

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Sunday.

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, we had no time to prepare different dishes

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you have a variety of food so I opted to book your hotel.

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, my parents like to eat Chinese food and

Belgium

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desserts but it takes hours to make them.

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realised

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decided

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to organize a party at the restaurant to get

together with

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family and friends. I was so pleased with your arrangements for that anniversary. The well-organized event

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happen

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persuaded me to write a letter of admiration. the special dish we ordered was Gordon Blue and it is not only well-cooked chicken but

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spices were appropriate. I really appreciate your efforts for

the

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this

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particular event. Best Regards,

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coherence cohesion

Ensure a clear and logical structure throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

Improve the greeting and closing to be more formal and respectful.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea.

task achievement

Provide more specific details and examples when discussing the food and services.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

182 words

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