You and some friends ate a meal at a reataurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter, give details of your visit to the restaurant, explain the reason for the celebration, say what was good about the food and the services.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing a letter in appreciation of about the best event in your cafe.
When I decided to celebrate my
parent's
25th anniversary Change noun form
parents'
so
I was bewildered Correct word choice
apply
where
I should organise Change preposition
about where
this
function. Linking Words
Besides
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this
, I don't know the price of the food so one of my friends has recommended booking your cafe. Linking Words
However
, I booked your restaurant for 10 people the Linking Words
last
Sunday.
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Although
, we had no time to prepare different dishes Linking Words
as well as
you have a variety of food so I opted to book your hotel. Linking Words
Furthermore
, my parents like to eat Chinese food and Linking Words
Belgium
desserts but it takes hours to make them. Correct your spelling
Belgian
Then
I Linking Words
realised
to organize a party at the restaurant to get Verb problem
decided
together with
family and friends.
I was so pleased with your arrangements for that anniversary. The well-organized event Linking Words
Correct pronoun usage
that happen
happen
Wrong verb form
happened
it
persuaded me to write a letter of admiration. the special dish we ordered was Gordon Blue and it is not only well-cooked chicken but Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
spices were appropriate. I really appreciate your efforts for Linking Words
the
particular event.
Best Regards,Correct your spelling
this
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coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear and logical structure throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Improve the greeting and closing to be more formal and respectful.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea.
task achievement
Provide more specific details and examples when discussing the food and services.