You ordered an item from an online shop three weeks ago. The shop said you would get the item two days later but you have not received it yet. Last week you sent an email about the situation to the shop, but you did not receive a reply. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter explain the situation complain about the bad service ask for immediate delivery of your order or your money back You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, I am writing regarding my new shoes that I bought online from your store a couple of weeks ago and since
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It is not delivered yet.
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that, I tried to connect with your company through an
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, but unfortunately, no response has been sent from you. I have ordered the Ultraboost shoes from your company for my niece as she is turning 25
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Thursday. I received a confirmation
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stating I should be getting shoes in just two days after placing my order and since
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I have been waiting on it.
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, I would like to complain about your customer service system. I sent an
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last
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week and I did not receive any reply on that. At least, I was expecting a reply whether by
email
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or call regarding the shipment. I would be happy if you could deliver the package urgently by Wednesday or I would like to have my money back, please. Yours Faithfully, Harsh Patel
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