The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first bar chart
represent
information about the proportion of males and females who do housework. Change the verb form
represents
While
other gives information about the time between
males and females spend Change preposition
apply
to clean
the Change the verb form
cleaning
house
in a country.
Overall
, the proportion and the average of women who did take care of a house
is highest than men in prepare
food, Wrong verb form
preparing
clean
Replace the word
cleaning
house
and Correct article usage
the house
take
care of animals, but for fixing Wrong verb form
taking
house
shows that men Correct article usage
the house
was
the highest than women.
Change the verb form
were
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words house with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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