The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The first bar chart
represent
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represents
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information about the proportion of males and females who do housework.
While
other gives information about the time
between
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apply
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males and females spend
to clean
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cleaning
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the
house
in a country.
Overall
, the proportion and the average of women who did take care of a
house
is highest than men in
prepare
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preparing
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food,
clean
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cleaning
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house
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the house
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and
take
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taking
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care of animals, but for fixing
house
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the house
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shows that men
was
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were
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the highest than women.
To begin
with,
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words house with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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