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The chart below shows the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart provides information about the percentage of British pupils at a university in England who have the capability to speak other languages than English between 2000 and 2010. Broadly, it is readily noticeable that pupils who were able to speak two other languages contributed the highest proportion in all periods.
According to
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 the chart, the dominant position came to
students
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 who speak two languages, making up 30% and 35% respectively in 2000 and 2010. A fifth per cent of
students
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 who spoke another language in 2010, showed a steady growth in which in 2000, it just accounted for fifteen per cent of the total. Interestingly, British
students
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 did not know to speak a language, making up a fifth in 2000.
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 figure decreased to 10% in 2010. An unchangeable proportion was reported by
students
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 who only spoke German in both periods. On the other side, there was a slight decline in pupils who spoke French only by 5%.

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