The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of dif erent employment status.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women

of dif erent employment status.
The given table compares the weekly amount of spare
time
spent by males and females of a variety of employment statuses between 1998 and 1999.
Overall
, the groups of unemployed and retired people of the two sexes spent the same amount of
time
on leisure activities. As can be clearly seen from the graph,
full-timetime
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full-time
employers of males enjoyed leisure
time
more than females within 2 years.
This
group of men spent nearly 45
hours
as pastime
whereas
accounted
time
for women was 38
hours
.
Additionally
,the amount of leisure
time
enjoyed by
full-timetime
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full-time
female workers was 40
hours
per week.
Following
this
, in the given
time
numbers for unemployed and retired people levelled off. Jobless and pensionry groups of men spent over 80
hours
on spare
time
activities
while
women had merely 78
hours
weekly. Those indicators on the graph were the highest in these 2 years. Housewives enjoyed almost 50
hours
which was a little more than part and full-timetime female employers , but lower than non-workers and pensionaries.
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