IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 5

The charts below show the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The charts below show the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
#show #value #country’s #exports #categories #percentage #change #category #summarise #information #features
The bar graph and the table represent the earnings of
export
Fix the agreement mistake
exports
show examples
 from a nation between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, all sectors, except gems and jewellery, increased their earnings in the period. Petroleum products and engineered goods were industries with considerably high revenue from their exports, which were always above 50
billions
Change to singular
billion
show examples
while
 the rest were always below 50
billions
Change to singular
billion
show examples
.
According to
 the table, textiles had the highest growth
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
up to 15.24%.
On the other hand
, agricultural products experienced the lowest growth at the time with only 0.81%.
In
Change the preposition
On
show examples
 the contrary, gems and jewellery was the only industry which witnessed the
declining
Replace the word
decline
show examples
 of
exports
Change the noun form
export
show examples
 earnings. The number was down 5.18% from 2015 to 2016.
Submitted by nadillamntr on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: