The charts below show the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
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The bar graph and the table represent the earnings of
export
from a nation between 2015 and 2016.
Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Overall
, all sectors, except gems and jewellery, increased their earnings in the period. Petroleum products and engineered goods were industries with considerably high revenue from their exports, which were always above 50 Linking Words
billions
Change to singular
billion
while
the rest were always below 50 Linking Words
billions
.
Change to singular
billion
According to
the table, textiles had the highest growth Linking Words
which
up to 15.24%. Correct pronoun usage
apply
On the other hand
, agricultural products experienced the lowest growth at the time with only 0.81%.
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In
the contrary, gems and jewellery was the only industry which witnessed the Change the preposition
On
declining
of Replace the word
decline
exports
earnings. The number was down 5.18% from 2015 to 2016.Change the noun form
export
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