Many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. However, this change may only benefit the workers, not the employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With modern sophisticated technology,

instead

of travelling to work, a greater number of

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are working from home, connecting their computers or other devices to the internet. As

such

, working traditions have changed with a new trend nowadays,

while

others believe that it only satisfies the employee rather than the employer. In my opinion,

although

both views have merit, I agree that working remotely does not only satisfy personnel but

also

the company management.

Firstly

, it

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to think that working remotely doesn’t admire the leaders,

For instance

, after the

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pandemic,

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some

of

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offices

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closed and the work-from-home trend started.

Moreover

, some of them already

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or even sold their offices.

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, GOOGLE is now allowing their IT employees to work remotely so that they can focus more on their job, at the same time

also

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their rental fees each month.

Furthermore

, they will not pay electricity bills

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or water consumption and

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this

will definitely lead to more profit.

Besides

, all these bills could eventually lead to an increase in the employee’s salaries and motivate their employees.

On the other hand

, employees not going to the

office

in the morning every day, especially in the winter time, is playing a great role in making their activity much easier, especially for the ones having a family.

For example

, some workers may prepare breakfast or lunch for their children,

while

others may take a break to bring their children to school.

As a result

, it seems that even workers are benefiting from not going to

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. Despite the difficulty of the job, or how consistent you are, being near your family, without being stressed in an

office

is an incentive.

Moreover

, families now are not spending money on buses, food delivery and even a nanny, since they are always available all the time. In conclusion, as mentioned before, staffs working in

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may decline growth,

furthermore

, sometimes stressful as well, especially when both spouses are working

while

having kids.

However

, paying for rent and electricity bills could sometimes damage the company’s profit and decrease the team’s salaries,

thus

in my opinion, working

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at home may

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both the crew and the business.