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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
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 the following
graph
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graph,
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 we can see an
analisis
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analysis
 of
India
's and
China
's
population
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populations
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. Starting in the
year
 2000 going all the way to the
year
 2050 making predictions about the outcome after the current
year
.
Overall
, the chart shows two populations in billions of
people
trought
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thought
 half of the 20 first century.
Furthermore
, both populations show an increase,
however
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however,
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India
's growth is
exponencially
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exponentially
exponential
 bigger than
China
's. Currently, the two
contries
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countries
 are very similar in
population
,
India
 has a little less than
China
 and both of them are going to keep
riseing
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rising
 until the
year
 2030. After that
year
 we can see the most notorious difference, on
one
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the one
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hand
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 the number of
people
 living in
India
 is going to
contineu
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continue
 to go up.
On the other hand
,
China
's highest point is in 2030 and by the
year
2050
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2050,
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 there is going to be a significant difference in
population
 compared to 20 years before.
As a result
,
India
 will have much more
people
 than
China
.
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Additionally
,
India
 in the
year
 2000 had a
population
 of one billion
people
, by 2050 it is going to be 1.6 billion.
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This
 demonstrates a
stedy
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steady
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 and constant increase with no drops in the entire time.
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Nevertheless
, the largest growth happened from 2000 to 2010
where
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when
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 the
population
 went up by a quarter.
However
,
China
 does not show the same, its
population
 went up from the
year
 2000 until
arond
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around
 the
year
 2020,
afterwards
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the
population
has
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had
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 a slight decrease going from
aproximetly
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approximately
 1.45 billion to 1.4.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, population, year, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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