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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in 6 areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in 6 areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The
percentage
 of
water
use
of
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in
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 6 regions
were
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was
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 recorded and put in a pie chart.The 6 regions are North
America
,South
America
,
Europe
,
Africa
,Central
Asia
 and Southeast
Asia
.There were 3 uses recorded,Industrial
use
,Agricultural
use
 and Domestic
use
. The highest
percentage
 of
water
 used for Industrial uses is in
Europe
 with 53% of its
water
 used for industrial
purposes
,followed by North
America
 with 48% of its
water
 used for industrial
purposes
.South
America
,
Africa
,Central
Asia
 and Southeast
Asia
uses
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use
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 less than 13% of
its
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their
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water
 for industrial
use
,with the least being Central
Asia
 with 5% of
its
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their
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water
 used
fo
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for
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 industrial
purposes
. The highest
percentage
 of
water
 used for agricultural
purposes
 is in Central
Asia
 with 88% of its
water
 used for agricultural
purposes
,followed by
Africa
 and Southeast
Asia
 with 84% and 81% respectively.
Europe
 uses the least
percentage
 of
water
 for agricultural
use
 with only 32%. The highest
percentage
 of
water
 used for domestic
use
 is in South
America
 with 19% of the
water
 being used for
domaestic
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domestic
purposes
,followed by
Europe
 and North
America
 with 15% and 13% respectively.The other remaining regions of
Africa
,Central
Asia
 and Southeast
Asia
 have relatively equal percentages of
water
 used for domestic
purposes
 with 9%,7% and 7% respectively. In conclusion,
Europe
 and North
America
uses
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use
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 most of
its
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their
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water
 for industrial and domestic uses and
Asia
,South
America
 and
Africa
uses
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use
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 most of
its
Correct pronoun usage
their
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water
 for agricultural uses.
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