The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two line graphs depict the total number of New Zealand's
imports
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from Australia and
Japan
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for 10 years period, between 1994 to 2004. In general, the number purchasing goods from overseas from Australia was more immense compared to
Japan
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. The
imports
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from Australia fluctuated over the ten-year period. It started just around 4000
million
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NZ
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$ and increased to approximately 6500
million
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NZ
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$ in 1996. After that, it fluctuated again until 1998 and reached its lowest point in 1999 with 3000
million
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NZ
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$. In the following years, the import figures increased rapidly to just above 7000
million
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NZ
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$ between year 2000-2001 and
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fluctuated once again in 2002. After that, it reached a peak in the middle of 2003 with 8000
million
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NZ
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$. Similar to the first graph, the import figures from
Japan
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fluctuated in these periods. From 2004, there was a significant increase from 3000
million
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NZ
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$ to just above 6000
million
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NZ
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$ which is the maximum figure for
imports
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from
Japan
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. It fluctuated rapidly between 1997 and 2000. From 2000, there was a gradual decrease in
imports
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until 2004 with 2000
million
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NZ
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$.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words imports, japan, million, nz with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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