The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The pie charts demonstrate to us the percentages of British students who can only speak their own tongue and
also
the other five tongues except English in the years 2000 and 2010.
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Firstly
, We can clearly see in the first pie chart which illustrates 2000 that Spanish is Linking Words
a
most commonly spoken Correct article usage
the
language
by %30. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, There is no title with a huge different proportion since the rates of the other five topics Linking Words
is
virtually similar. The ratios of both The French only and Another Change the verb form
are
language
are covering %15 segments on the picture. Use synonyms
Similarly
, The population of German speakers and two other Linking Words
language
speakers have an equal percentage Use synonyms
by
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we must supplement that they form the smallest areas.
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Secondly
, The other pie chart shows us the changes in rates of topics over 10 years. That the percentages do not change abruptly is undeniably real. Linking Words
Besides
, Spanish is Linking Words
also
the top option, with a 5 per cent increase, as above. The other Linking Words
language
and two other languages seem to raise their percentage by %5. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, We can analyse that there is a dramatic fall -from %20Linking Words
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10
in no other Change preposition
to 10
language
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, The French is the second topic and its portion decreased by %5 . The Linking Words
German
protect their position with identical rate (%10).
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Overall
, Spanish was the favourite tongue of the British at that university after English from 2000 to the following 10 years. The growth and contraction of the proportions of other speakers progressed smoothly.Linking Words
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