The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

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The table shows information about the percentage of males and females consuming five or more portions of
fruit
and
vegetables
per day by age group
such
as from 19 to 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 44, 45 to 54, 55 to 64, 65 to 74, and 75 year old in the UK in 2006. As can be seen from the table, it is obvious that there is the most consumed
fruit
and
vegetables
in both men and women aged 55 to 64. In detail, teenagers do not prefer to eat
fruit
and
vegetables
;
in other words
,
this
age is the lowest percentage of people who choose to eat these, with 15 per cent of males and 17 per cent of females. Looking at the details, individuals who are 75 years old have the same percentage of consumption in both genders, with 25 per cent. In conclusion, the number of women who consume
fruit
and
vegetables
is more popular than men of every age in the UK.
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