The chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010.
The charts demonstrate the proportion of British
students
at one university in England who were able to speal
other Correct your spelling
speak
languages
in addition
to English, in 2000 and 2010.
According to
the charts, the percentage of students
speaking German and two other languages
remained the same percent
in 2000 and 2010, Change the spelling
per cent
whereas
, figures of
other Change preposition
for
languages
changed in 2010.
The pie charts provide strong information, that Spanish represents
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are
students
could speak in no other language
except for English. In comparison, 15% spoke French and another 15% spoke another language
too.
In 2010 Spanish was 35% of all students
, which means its percentage had increased. Another language
's figure increased too and made up 20%. Whereas
, no other language
had decreased and comprisen
10%. Correct your spelling
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percentage
German
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of German
languages
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