1.The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

1.The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart shows the distribution of students by gender across six art-based disciplines at a UK university in 2011. Interestingly, English language and literature are the most popular for both
males
and
females
.
However
, when looking at the least popular subject by gender, for boys philosophy has the fewest students,
while
the lowest enrolment for women
is
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history and archaeology. For
males
, there is only one subject where they outnumbered
females
, with art and design having approximately 180
males
and 160
females
.
In contrast
,
females
have higher attendance than
males
in five subjects, with philosophy having three times the participation of
females
. Where boys and girls students had similar interests was language-based subjects. As you can see, the top three disciplines for both genders were linguistics, English language and literature and communication and media studies.
To sum up
, in 2011 women were more likely to attend university, and language-based subjects had the most interest in both genders.
however
, more men attended art and design courses.
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  • figures
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  • popular
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  • subject choices
  • analyze
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