The line chart below shows the percentage of renewable energy production in Germany from 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line chart below shows the percentage of renewable energy production in Germany from 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph depicts the proportion of renewable energy
result
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in 20 years (2000-2020) in German, the categories are solar, wind, hydropower and
biomass
. in the brief, it can be seen that
that
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the percentages in solar, wind and
biomass
showed an upward
tren
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, whilst hydropower experienced a downward trend over the period stated.
Initially
, in 2000, the solar category stood just above 0% and gradually
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to about 10% in 2010, over the next ten years the
percentages
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number significantly
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to above 15%.
Futher
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Further
, Wind was notified as the highest percentage from all the categories,
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with just about 5%
then
dramatically
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to under 30 and
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the biggest number. Following that, there were
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significant
changed
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on
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Biomass
.
Conversely
, the hydropower proportion right over the early period started above 5%, and it
was gradually decline
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over the next mentioned years.
in addition
, it dropped to under 5% in 2020 which just far
fewer
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from
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than
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biomass
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words biomass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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