The line chart below shows the percentage of renewable energy production in Germany from 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph depicts the proportion of renewable energy
result
in 20 years (2000-2020) in German, the categories are solar, wind, hydropower and Fix the agreement mistake
results
biomass
. in the brief, it can be seen that that
the percentages in solar, wind and Remove the redundancy
apply
biomass
showed an upward tren
, whilst hydropower experienced a downward trend over the period stated.
Correct your spelling
trend
Initially
, in 2000, the solar category stood just above 0% and gradually increase
to about 10% in 2010, over the next ten years the Wrong verb form
increased
percentages
number significantly Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
rise
to above 15%. Wrong verb form
rose
Futher
, Wind was notified as the highest percentage from all the categories, Correct your spelling
Further
started
with just about 5% Wrong verb form
starting
then
dramatically grow
to under 30 and Wrong verb form
growing
reached
the biggest number. Following that, there were Wrong verb form
reaching
not
significant Correct your spelling
no
changed
Replace the word
changes
on
Change preposition
in
Biomass
.
Conversely
, the hydropower proportion right over the early period started above 5%, and it was gradually decline
over the next mentioned years. Change the verb form
gradually declined
in addition
, it dropped to under 5% in 2020 which just far fewer
Correct quantifier usage
less
from
Change preposition
than
biomass
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Vocabulary: Replace the words biomass with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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