The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.
The line graphs illustrate the rate of goods imported to New
Zealand
from
Australia
and
Japan
, during a 10-year period from 1994 to 2004.
According to
the information,
Australia
had a higher
overall
rate of imports to New
Zealand
rather than
Japan
,
while
both figures experienced some fluctuations. At the beginning of the period,
Australia
imported more products to New
Zealand
, with a difference of 1000 million from
Japan
.
Moreover
, both countries drastically increased their shipped products during the term until 1996,
Australia
underwent a gradual decrease for a year and
then
experienced a slight growth until 1998, when it slumped up to 1999.
In contrast
,
Japan
's exports to New
Zealand
peaked in 1997 before they dramatically declined until 1999. Both countries escalated greatly in 1999.
Consequently
,
Australia
imported 7000 million products in the span between 2000 and 2001 but surged again until 2002. Before 2003, the number hiked again and reached its peak in 2004.
On the other hand
,
Japan
's imports continually rose for a year when it progressively fell until the end of the period.
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