You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

The

given

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apply

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pie chart

illustrate

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illustrates

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the difference in time consumption of working

adults

in various activities in

a

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the

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same country but in different years.

Overall

there was a noticeable change in percentage in the given years. In 1958, 33 percent

adults

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of adults

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were working and

the

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apply

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2% were traveling for work.

While

8% were relaxing at home ,

also

the 32%

adults

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of adults

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were sleeping.

And the

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The

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19%

were enjoying by

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enjoyed

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going out with their friends and family

while

the left 6%

were having

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had

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other

interest

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interests

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like playing sports. Moving towards 2008, there

is

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are

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42%

adults

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of adults

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who

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apply

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were working and

the

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apply

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8% were

traveling

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travelling

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for work.

On the other hand

, 13% were relaxing and

the

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apply

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25% of

adults

were sleeping. And

the

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a

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13% decrease in the

adults

going out with their family, which is 6% and the rest of

8

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the 8

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%

were having

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had

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other

interest

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interests

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. In conclusion,

the

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apply

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both pie chart shows growth in

spending

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the spending

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times of

adults

in 1958 compared to 2008. And 2008 is leading in

term

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terms

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of increasing 9% of working and 6% of

adults

who were

traveling

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travelling

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for work.