in many countries today, if people want to find a job , they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern era, moving away from hometown and relatives to work in a corporation is getting widespread. It can lead to numerous problems which

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me reluctant to endorse it and I fully disagree with it.

To begin

with, getting

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from family to take a job has

alot

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a lot

of critics. Settling in a city

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they don't have any family

member

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makes individuals more lonely which is a prevalent problem in

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era and leads to dangerous disorders like depression.

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Furthermore

, family and friends can motivate people to put effort

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their future and can be emotional supporters in difficult situations as well.

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, deprivation of

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boon can make people less motivated for their future and lives and it can influence their

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and studies.

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, when I was in seventh grade, I should have gone to another city for my school and after that, I was thinking about my family constantly and I couldn't concentrate.

On the other hand

, proponents of moving away from relatives tout its advantages. Living with family can bring individuals less responsibility.

Initially

, it may

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an advantage but it keeps youth away from

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of life and

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a lot of problems for them when they get married.

Therefore

, being

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independent

can contribute to

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this

problem and help people to manage their lives and inputs and outputs monthly.

For instance

, researches indicate that about 80

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of couples who have experienced

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independence

before marriage have a successful marriage

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it is 56

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youth who lived with their parents. To

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conclude

, moving to new places for new jobs, away from family is becoming viral which brings some problems and benefits, too. I think its advantages don't

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outweigh

its disadvantages and hope someday all members of society

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live with their families without any concerns.