The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the pie chart displays the data of people living in poverty in the UK for each house, having seven categories: single and couple age, single and couple without
children
, solo parents, couples
with children
, and all general householders.
Overall
, solo parents have the biggest proportion; the second place is for the feature of single without children
; the least category is Age couples
with a tiny fraction. Moreover
, couples
with children
and single-age people have similar data on levels of poverty.
Solo parents and single without children
represent the biggest percentage of this
graph, one is just over a quarter
and the other one is just almost a quarter
, Bu, couples
with children
and couples
without children
have an almost equal portion, one with an exactly quarter
and the other almost a quarter
.
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in the analysis, and aged couple has a tiny portion, following single-aged personas with 7% and Fix the agreement mistake
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couples
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