The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graphs illustrate the statistics of New Zealand
imports
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from
Australia
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and
Japan
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between 1994 and 2004.
Overall
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, both imported commodities from
Australia
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and
Japan
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have fluctuated.
At the end
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of the period,
Australia
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showed an upward trend and
Japan
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experienced a downward trend. In terms of New Zealand
imports
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, the rate from
Australia
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has increased since 1996.
Then
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, it became unstable two
years
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later, hitting a low point at 3000 in 1999.
However
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, the non-domestic items picked up again in the middle of 2000. Even though the total of
imports
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decreased in 2002, it
finally
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saw a substantial rise with 7,000 in 2004.
In addition
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, the proportion of
imports
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from
Japan
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does not have a figure of fluctuations compared to
Australia
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. The non-domestic products from
Japan
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gradually decreased over the first four
years
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.
Although
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this
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total of
imports
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fell to 2000 million in 1999, In the remaining
years
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, the
imports
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indicated a growing number of dollars but dropped in four
years
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, reaching around 2000 million.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words imports, australia, japan, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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