Some people think that in school discipline should br the job of the teacher where as some believe it is the parents responsibility. discuss both side and give your opinion.

Nowadays, some groups of people think

discipline

at

school

is only the

responsibility

of the

teachers

,

while

others say the main

responsibility

is of

parents

.

This

essay will discuss those arguments and it agrees with the idea that

parents

have a big

responsibility

in the education of

children

. On one

hand

,

teachers

have the main

responsibility

of helping students at

school

with subjects and doubts that they have about specific topics in a class. Throughout those classes,

teacher

make their own

rules

as part of the

discipline

, which will help them with the dynamic of the different activities, In those moments, the

teacher

will give some scores,

according to

the goal of the course, and will be evaluated if the students got achieved the expected result for each period. After the class, the

teachers

do not have total control of the

behaviors

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of the alumnus, since they have to follow the general

rules

and duties of the

school

, and if they do not respect those, probably they will have some consequences

according to

the

school

manual.

For example

, Catholic schools have the rule of going to Mass every

last

Friday of each month, which

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uniform. I believe as members of the

school

community,

teachers

and students will have to respect,

otherwise

will have to look for other places with different strategies, since

parents

must share those commitments with their

children

On the other

hand

,

parents

have the main control of the

behaviors

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of their

children

, since they have some specific parenting practices that will be shown at

school

and other spaces, and

due to

this

style

children

build their attitude and part of their personality and sometimes

school

teacher

supports

this

process in their classes, but

teachers

do not have the time to deal with the whole

discipline

of

school

without

parents

aims, seeing as

parents

spend time with them and help with emotional issues that

children

face daily.

For example

, teenagers start a period of discovering who are they and what they want in their lives, in

this

stage is when

parents

need to be there, supporting them, and sometimes

teachers

identify some unusual patterns that later are communicated with their families. That's why I believe

teachers

are not the main

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responsibility

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for the

discipline

of

school

, they need

parent's

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support with compliance

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the general

rules

. In conclusion,

parents

and

teachers

need to work

hand

in

hand

to support the

discipline

of the

school

, because

teachers

can not manage all the responsibilities, especially parenting practice since those practices are evident in

school

spaces. I believe the main

discipline

has to start from home, and at

school

is support with the general

rules

and

teacher

's

advices

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.