The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts provide information about the average rates
in
types of nutrients that are contained in typical Change preposition
of
meals
which might be unhealthy if consumed a lot.
Overall
, there are 3 main types of nutrients on the charts which consist of Sodium
, Saturated fats
and Added Sugar
.
Starting with Breakfast, 14% of Sodium
is contained in morning meals
, and 16% of both Saturated fats
and Added Sugars are found in breakfast. On the other hand
, lunch meals
contain a lot more Sodium
and 26% of Saturated fats
, as well as
19% of Added Sugar
.
With the last
2 meals
remaining, food served at Dinner contain
the most amount of Change the verb form
contains
Sodium
and Fat out of all the other meals
. Additionally
, 23% of Sugar
is found at
Dinner Change preposition
in
based
Verb problem
apply
meals
. Lastly
, Snacks contain 42% of Sugar
which is the highest percentage compared to the 3 other food types, along with
only 14% Sodium
and 21% of Saturated fats
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