The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts below illustrate the value of
goods
and services brought from
Australia
and
Japan
into
Newzealand
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New Zealand
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between the years 1995 and 2004.
Overal
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Overall
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,
imports
from both countries fluctuated over the period of time. Both
in
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the beginning and end of the period ,
goods
and services purchased from
Australia
were higher than those from
Japan
.
However
,
imports
from
Japan
were higher than from
Australia
. Between 1994 and 1995, imported
goods
from
Australia
remained stable at
NZ
4000
million
dollars
while
those from
Japan
increased slightly from
NZ
3000
million
dollars
to
Nz4000
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NZ 4000
million
dollars
.
However
, there was significant growth in
imports
from
Japan
from
NZ
$4000 in 1995 to just over
NZ
$6000
million
in 1997
whereas
imported
goods
and services from Newzealand rocketed from
NZ
$ 4000 IN 1995 to nearly
NZ
$7000 in 1996 and later dropped to about NZ5500
million
dollars
in 1997 There was a plummet in
goods
shipped from
Australia
from nearly
NZ
$5500 in 1998 to
NZ
$3000 in 1999.
In contrast
,
imports
from
Japan
fluctuated during the same years. There was a substantial drop in
goods
brought in from
Japan
from 2000 to 2004.
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  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
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  • significant changes
  • consistency
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  • diverge
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  • spiked
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