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Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant .Say about bad service and awful meals

#complaint #manager #restaurant #service #meals
Dear Sir I am writing
this
 letter to complain about the unpleasant service and food of your restaurant.
Last
 night I went to your restaurant
for celebrated
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to celebrate
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 my daughterʼs birthday.Beforehand I had booked a table with
romantic
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a romantic
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 view,but it was not ready when we came there.And others sat down
our
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at our
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 place.
Then
 your service suggested another table where at the corner. We ordered some special meals.
Such
 as
,
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apply
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vegetables
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vegetable
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 soap
to
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for
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starter
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the starter
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,
snack
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snacks
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 for
main
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the main
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 and cake for
sweet
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the sweet
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.When we ordered our meal,we had to wait for a long time.Meanwhile,
dishes
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the dishes
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 were
bit
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a bit
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 salty
also
,
some
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and some
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 of them were not fresh. When the
vegetables
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 soup bowl arrived,I found a long hair in it.It
was
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dissapointed
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disappointed
 me.We did not enjoy the food and your restaurant service.
This
 experience actually offended our celebration mood.Please change your chef who does not
enough
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have enough
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 qualifications to cook. Thank you for your understanding. Yours faithfully, Lucy
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coherence cohesion
Work on developing a clear paragraph structure by focusing on a single issue per paragraph to enhance clarity and organization.
task achievement
Include a politeness strategy when complaining. Acknowledge the restaurant's usual standards before stating your complaint which can make your letter sound more balanced.
task achievement
Correct all the grammatical errors and word usage mistakes throughout the letter. Pay attention to verb forms, prepositions, and singular/plural nouns.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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