Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant .Say about bad service and awful meals

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Dear Sir I am writing

this

letter to complain about the unpleasant service and food of your restaurant.

Last

night I went to your restaurant

for celebrated

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to celebrate

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my daughterʼs birthday.Beforehand I had booked a table with

romantic

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a romantic

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view,but it was not ready when we came there.And others sat down

our

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at our

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place.

Then

your service suggested another table where at the corner. We ordered some special meals.

Such

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apply

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vegetables

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vegetable

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soap

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for

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starter

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the starter

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snack

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snacks

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for

main

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the main

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and cake for

sweet

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the sweet

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.When we ordered our meal,we had to wait for a long time.Meanwhile,

dishes

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were

bit

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salty

also

some

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and some

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of them were not fresh. When the

vegetables

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soup bowl arrived,I found a long hair in it.It

was

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dissapointed

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disappointed

me.We did not enjoy the food and your restaurant service.

This

experience actually offended our celebration mood.Please change your chef who does not

enough

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have enough

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qualifications to cook. Thank you for your understanding. Yours faithfully, Lucy

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coherence cohesion

Work on developing a clear paragraph structure by focusing on a single issue per paragraph to enhance clarity and organization.

task achievement

Include a politeness strategy when complaining. Acknowledge the restaurant's usual standards before stating your complaint which can make your letter sound more balanced.

task achievement

Correct all the grammatical errors and word usage mistakes throughout the letter. Pay attention to verb forms, prepositions, and singular/plural nouns.

Word Count

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Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

144 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a complaint letter to the manager of the restaurant .Say about bad service and awful meals

Word Count

The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich are becoming richer and the poor are even getting poorer. What problems can the situation cause? What can be done to reduce this gap?

Some people believe that the activities of large multinational corporations mostly benefit the economies of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these large multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some people think that the school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with academic subjects at a school. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

The government should sometimes infringe on people's freedom for the security of society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species,while others believe that it is waste of money. What is your opinion?