You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: -Introduce yourself. -Explain that you did not buy the items listed. -Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear
sir
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Sir
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or
madam
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Madam
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, My Name is Parth Patel, and I am
a
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apply
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useing
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using
your
Bank
Credit From HDFC
Bank
. My credit
card
no is 2312 xxxx xxxx 1438. In
this
letter
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letter,
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I am
inform
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informing
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you that I am not purchasing
item
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an item
the item
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in
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on
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this
card
. On
sunday
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Sunday
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I have
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to stay
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stay
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in my home and
psot
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post
office man
deliver
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delivered
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a letter
in
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to
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your
Bank
. I open the letter and check my
card
statement. I am still
desapoented
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disappointed
from your
Bank
. Because I have not
buying
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bought
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the costly item from their
card
. I have
buying
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bought
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the product from
other
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another
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Bank
card
. I have
a
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apply
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three credit
card
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cards
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from
diffrent
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different
Bank
. And I have
useing
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using
used
IDBI
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an IDBI
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Bank
card
.
Also
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Also,
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I have paid all my
transtions
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transitions
transaction
amount I may use it.
This
is
wroung
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wrong
statement and check the
curret
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current
transtion
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transition
. My
last
Bill pay date is 1.June.2024 and I request to you
chrenge
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change
challenge
me
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my
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statement
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a statement
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and
reganrent
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regret
my bill. as soon as possible.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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faithfully, Parth
patel
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Patel
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.
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structure
Please focus on creating clear paragraphs, each dedicated to a single topic. The introduction, explanation of the problem, and request for a solution should be separated for enhanced clarity.
tone
Use formal language appropriate for writing to a bank manager, avoiding casual terms and ensuring correct spelling (e.g., 'using' instead of 'useing', 'disappointed' instead of 'desapoented').
content
To improve the completeness of your response, ensure you clearly state the requested action from the bank, using formal requests (e.g., 'I kindly request a thorough investigation of the transactions listed and an adjustment of my statement accordingly.').
grammar
Check for grammatical accuracy and spelling. Using tools or asking for proofreading can significantly enhance your letter's professionalism.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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