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The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two graphs depict information about the imports from
Australia
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 and
Japan
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 to New
Zealand
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 between 1994 and 2004. It is shown that through the period of time,
Australia
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 always brings their stuff to New
Zealand
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 higher than
Japan
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. In 1994, Kangaroo country popped into New
Zealand
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 with approximately 3,900
million
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, whilst
Japan
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 had 3,000
million
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. Hereafter,
Australia
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 had a steady rise in 1996 with just over 6,500
million
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,
then
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 dropped significantly in 1999 with only 3,000
million
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,
thus
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 becoming the lowest imports in a decade.
However
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, after that massive drop,
Australia
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 elevated their performance and reached 7,000
million
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 in 2001. Even though in 2003 reduced repeatedly but gained a dramatic increase in 2004 with 8,000
million
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.
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, the stocks that came to New
Zealand
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 from
Japan
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succeeded in reaching a peak two times, in 1997 around 6,200
million
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 and in 2,000 just over 3,000
million
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. After those years, from 2001 to 2004 reduced steadily until reached the lowest ever with 2,000
million
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, japan, zealand, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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