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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager.  In your letter: give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food and the service

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my
satisfication
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satisfaction
 and admiration regarding the outstanding food and service we
have
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enjoyed in your
restaraunt
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restaurant
 "Big
star
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"
last
 Friday. It was my friend's birthday. So we decided to celebrate it at your
restaraunt
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restaurant
. We visited your
restaraunt
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restaurant
in
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on
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 26th June at 7pm.
Due to
 its
convinient
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convenient
 location and a good reputation for delicious food. We enjoyed a traditional French
fooda
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food
foods
 for dinner and a special black forest cake from your
restaraunt
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restaurant
. It really
did
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was
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 worth the money because I suppose you have hired the best chef in the town. The service of the waiters
are
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also
 marvellous. The interior design of your place is adequately stunning. I hope the
authoreties
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authorities
 of your
restaraunt
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restaurant
 will always ensure
this
 excellent service and food to all its guests.
Your
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 faithfully Sabin
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your letter follows a logical structure with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Introduce the purpose of the letter, provide the necessary details in the body, and finish with a polite closing statement.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas across sentences and paragraphs. This will make your letter flow more smoothly and help the reader understand the connection between different parts of your message.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task in sufficient detail. Make sure to give reasons for the celebration, explain what was good about the food and the service, and provide specific examples to support your statements. This will help you fully satisfy the task requirements.
task achievement
Maintain a formal tone throughout your letter. Avoid informal language or slang, and use polite expressions to show respect to the reader, which is appropriate for a letter to a restaurant manager.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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  • outstanding
  • exquisite
  • impeccable
  • flawless
  • attentive
  • accommodating
  • courteous
  • prompt
  • delicious
  • mouthwatering
  • satisfying
  • memorable
  • thank
  • impressed
  • appreciate
  • grateful
  • recommend
  • celebration
  • occasional
  • special
  • occasion
  • stellar
  • exceptional
  • commend
  • commendable
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