The pie chart displays water consumption in six regions used in three different purposes presented as percentages.

The pie chart displays water consumption in six regions used in three different purposes presented as percentages.
The pie chart displays water consumption for industrial , agricultural and domestic uses in six
regoins
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regions
as
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a persentage
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persentage
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percentage
.
Overall
, South America,
Cenrtal
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Central
Asia
, Africa and South East
Asia
tend to
use
water for agricultural
use
while
Europe and North America
used
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it in
industrial
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the industrial
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sector. Regarding agricultural
use
,Central
Asia
was the highest consumer at 88%, followed by South East
Asia
and Africa at 81%and 84%
respectivly
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respectively
.
In addition
, South America had the largest
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proportion
propotion
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proportion
acconted
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accounted
for 19%
at
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water domestic
use
,
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