The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the
share
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of British students at a certain university in the United Kingdom in terms of their ability to communicate in other
languages
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other than English in the year of 2000 and 2010.
According to
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the charts,
Spanish
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remained as the main other
language
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in the past decade. As for percentage
share
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, each of the other
language
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witnessed divergent trends throughout the years:
Spanish
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and another
language
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increased, no other
language
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and French decreased,
while
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German and two
languages
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were stagnant. As seen in the illustrations, four type of the university students' non-English
languages
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experienced different proportion changes between 2000 and 2010. On the one hand,
Spanish
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and another
language
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experienced an upward trend by 5 percentage points that
Spanish
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increased from 30% to 35%,
while
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another
language
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rised from 15% to 20%.
On the other hand
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, there are
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reductions: No other
language
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reduced by half from 20% to 10% and French dropped from 15% to 10%. Despite some shift in the proportion
share
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of students' other
language
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in a university in 2000 and 2010, there are some other
languages
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' percentage that remained the same. In fact, both German and two other
languages
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contributed to 10% other
languages
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in 2000 until 2010.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words share, languages, spanish, language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • multilingualism
  • globalisation
  • immigration
  • education policy
  • career prospects
  • cultural understanding
  • distribution
  • percentage
  • increased/decreased
  • significant
  • trends
  • shifts
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