The graphs illustrate the
shifting
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shift
of
sales between 2003 and 2013 in New Zealand. there are four Change preposition
in
aspect
shown in Change to a plural noun
aspects
this
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charts
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chart
containing
music, travel, Verb problem
apply
books
and clothes.
There are some of similar interest to some of Use synonyms
entertaining
needs after decade, Add an article
the entertaining
such
as travelling which always the most popular sales in New Zealand. Linking Words
although
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in
2013 has Change preposition
apply
been
declined Unnecessary verb
apply
people
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are
still like Unnecessary verb
apply
going
to travel, to refresh their Verb problem
apply
mind
, to know other Fix the agreement mistake
minds
culture
and Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
enjoying
the magnificent Change the verb form
to enjoy
view
. Fix the agreement mistake
views
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aspect Change the wording
Another
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also
has been Correct pronoun usage
that also
decrease
for a decade is the interest Change the verb form
decreasing
decreased
of
buying Change preposition
in
a
clothes, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
people
tend to wear or buy Use synonyms
the
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apply
high quality
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high-quality
of
clothes Change preposition
apply
then
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it
all over the years.
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them
On the other hand
, Nowadays Linking Words
people
are becoming more keen on music/film and Use synonyms
books
for their entertainment. Technology development and Use synonyms
newest
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the newest
discovery
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discoveries
has
impacted Change the verb form
have
to
their habits in New Zealand, it is good to spend Change preposition
apply
the
time Correct article usage
apply
by
reading Change preposition
apply
books
because Use synonyms
books
Use synonyms
is
the window Change the verb form
are
of
knowledge.
Change preposition
to
To sum up
, Linking Words
people
are shifting their interest from Use synonyms
traveling
to film and music. because Change the spelling
travelling
people
are easy to access and cheap, Use synonyms
its
only on the tip of our finger. Replace the word
it's
it is
beside
travelling needs a lot of money to Change preposition
Besides
expend
and not as easy as other be.Verb problem
spend
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