One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports trainer. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. In your letter: say how well you know your friend describe the qualifications and experience that your friend has explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
finds you well. I have a friend who want
to Change the verb form
wants
apply
a job. His numerous skills and social methods will astonish you.
There is all Add the preposition
apply for
basic
information about:
Correct article usage
the basic
Firstly
he is
my friend since I saw him in the military base Wrong verb form
has been
moreover
we both were pilots. We were in the same group and we did all private
missions that Correct article usage
the private
was
given by Change the verb form
were
president
.
Add an article
the president
Secondly
his experience in Add a comma
Secondly,
military
can be useful for Correct article usage
the military
young
generation. Just not being a Correct article usage
the young
succesful
pilot, he took lessons from Correct your spelling
successful
painting
master and wants to open Correct article usage
a painting
art
gallery. I think children will Correct article usage
an art
joy
.
Add a missing verb
be joy
Last
thing is that you can think how Change the article
The last
this
person apply
a summer camp Correct subject-verb agreement
applies
while
being a pilot?
He is retired and needs a job Change the punctuation
.
moreover
there are examples that you can't just refuse him.
In conclusion, I think he will be a good trainer and good father while
being a soldier. I will wait
your answer Add the preposition
wait for
an
he is Correct your spelling
and
only
person who is suitable for Add an article
the only
this
job.
Best,
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Task Achievement
Ensure your letter directly addresses the topic by adhering closely to the prompts given. You should explicitly state how well you know your friend, describe their qualifications and experience in the specific field of sports training, and explain why they would be suitable for this job.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter should follow a logical structure, beginning with an appropriate introduction, followed by separate paragraphs for each point you are making, and concluding with a polite closing statement.
Coherence and Cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea that directly relates to the task. Avoid straying from the topic by including irrelevant information or personal anecdotes unless they directly support your friend's qualifications for the specific job.
Task Achievement
Adopt a tone suitable for a formal letter. This includes using formal greetings and closings, avoiding slang, and ensuring that your language is polite and professional.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,