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Band 4.5

ou were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter: - tell them why you need to move the interview time - ask to change the interview date - explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job

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Dear Mr Tom, I am writing a request letter for
postphoning
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postponing
 my interview
time
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 with you on the 7th of July 2024 at 9am. The reason of asking you
this
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favor
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favour
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 on the account
of
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because
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 my little baby girl
has
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is
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 really sick. No one
be
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 able to go and see the doctor and that
why
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i
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I
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 delay the interview
time
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.
Furthermore
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,
i
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I
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 am asking
for changing
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to change
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 the interview
time
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due to
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 the fact that
i
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I
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 will definitely
available
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 on
this
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 date 8th of July 2024 and
i
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I
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 will be able to show up. I am so interested in that job because it is my dream plus
i
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I
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 still looking for a career that may be able to provide
the
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 needs of my family. Not only that,
i
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I
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 have a little girl and she is very sick and that
one
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is one
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 of the issues to
encounter
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 when she
enter
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 the hospital.
Therefore
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,
i
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 appreciate your
time
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 and let me know if you have more
quiries
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queries
inquiries
 or contact me via
this
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 email [email protected]. Thank you, yours faithfully.

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task achievement
Ensure the reason for postponing the interview is clearly explained with relevant details for better understanding.
coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs to separate different ideas for improved clarity and organization.
task achievement
Greeting and closing lines are appropriate, but improving the formal tone of the letter can enhance its professionalism.
coherence cohesion
Check spelling, punctuation, and grammar to improve overall coherence and cohesion. For example, 'postphoning' should be 'postponing', and ensure sentences are complete.
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