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you were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter: - tell them why you need to move the interview time - ask to change the interview date - explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job

#interview #weeks #date #employer #move #time #change #job
Dear
sir
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/madam, I am
writting
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writing
this
 letter to request you to please forward my
interview
date
. I am Harmanjot Singh and
i
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I
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 am a designer software engineer
and
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apply
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I have a
cetificate
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certificate
of
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in
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 ProE, Autocad and CAD/CAM. I applied online one week
age
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ago
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 for the job of Assistant designer.
Although
 I have
selected
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been selected
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 for the
interview
 dated April 5, 2024, I could not
attand
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attend
this
interview
due to
marriage
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the marriage
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 of my real brother
is
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being
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 on
same
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the same
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date
 and
i
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I
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 can not miss
this
occausion
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occasion
 since
this
 is the destination wedding and all the ons of
this
 wedding
on
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are on
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 me. So, I could not
availabe
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available
 on
this
date
. I
also
 do not miss the
apportunity
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opportunity
 to
joing
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join
joining
 your company because
this
 company is renowned in my state and close to my house so I easily commute to
office
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the office
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 without wasting
of
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apply
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time. So I
hardly
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kindly
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 request you to please shift my
interview
date
in
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to
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 any day
of
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in
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second
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the second
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 week of April. I look forward to hearing from you. You faithfully, Harmanjot Singh Your
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General
Ensure proper spelling and grammar. For example, 'writting' should be 'writing', 'attand' should be 'attend', and 'apportunity' should be 'opportunity'. Correct spelling enhances clarity and professionalism.
General
Use formal language and avoid contractions in formal letters. For example, use 'do not' instead of 'don't', 'I cannot' instead of 'I can not'. Maintaining a formal tone is essential in professional communication.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your letter into clear paragraphs. Start with an introductory paragraph, followed by a paragraph explaining your situation, another for your request, and conclude with a closing paragraph. This improves readability and structure.
Task Achievement
Be concise and precise in your requests and explanations. Instead of saying 'all the ons of this wedding on me', you could say 'I am responsible for organizing much of the wedding'. This makes your message clearer to the reader.
General
Close your letter formally and correctly. Instead of 'You faithfully,', use 'Yours faithfully,' followed by your name. Ensuring correct closing phrases adds to the professionalism of your letter.
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