The line chart illustrates the labour force employment in economic sectors during the period from 1930 to 2010 in USA. These five economic sectors include industrial sector, sales and office, farming and fishing and foresting, technical sector, and other services.
The given
line
graph demonstrates the work staff hiering
in the five different sections of Correct your spelling
hiring
economy
over 80 years between 1930 and 2010 in the United States of America. The intended economic sectors consist of industrial, agriculture, fishing and foresting,technical and other services sectors.
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the economy
Overall
, with a rapid glance
it is Add a comma
glance,
obviousely
detectable that the group which Correct your spelling
obviously
include
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includes
agriculture
sector went on a different pattern from the beginning to the end of the time span of Correct article usage
the agriculture
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study
while
other groups follow
the same stable pattern in the first half of Wrong verb form
followed
duration
and in the latter one all except Correct article usage
the duration
from
other services group experienced a slight rise Remove the preposition
apply
untill
the end point of their graphs.
Moving to the details of Correct your spelling
until
light
blue Add an article
the light
line
,
shows that the rate of Remove the comma
apply
employement
in Correct your spelling
employment
farmingm
fishing and foresting part was almost stable from 1930 to 1960 Correct your spelling
farming
whith
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with
which
subtle
decreasing Correct article usage
a subtle
frome
just less than 80 Correct your spelling
from
employer
to just above 60 individuals. Afterward 1960, the Change to a plural noun
employers
hiering
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hiring
hearing
work force
in these sections slumped sharply to reach just a bit above zero Correct your spelling
workforce
at
2010.
Diving into the other Change preposition
in
line
of the graphs reveals that despite the purple line
, which is related to other services employment, and remain
approximately stable Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
around
10 over Change preposition
at around
whole
80 years, the others after 1980 changed towards the more number of Correct article usage
the whole
hierd
cases which ended to 20, 30, and just less than 40 in green, red, and dark blue lines respectively.Correct your spelling
hard
hired
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