The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line charts below give information about the pattern in current popular both
boys
and Change noun form
boy's
boys'
girls's
names in the UK from 1925 to 2000.
Remove the s
girls'
It is clear that
there were three names which was
the most popular in boys and Change the verb form
were
girls
. The name that was owned by the
most boys was belonged to Daniel and Correct article usage
apply
in
Change preposition
for
girls
was Emily.
In popular boy's
names, Fix the agreement mistake
boys'
although
Daniel was the highest and peaked four
per Change preposition
at four
thousand
at
1925 Change preposition
in
then
showed a dramatical
increase to 12 per Replace the word
dramatic
thousand
in 1975, it had a small decrease in 2000 by one per thousand
. Whereas
Alexander was launched in
one per Change preposition
at
thousand
and just had an enormously jumped
when reached 10 per Replace the word
enormous jump
thousand
between 1975 and 2000, Oliver illustrated fluctuation after a rose by five per thousand
in 1950, it dropped equal
the upper figures before rocked more than Daniel with 13 per Change the adjective
equally
thousand
in 2000.
In girls
Add a comma
girls,
while
Sophia and Isabella had a similar trend along with
the same number when maintained 0,5
per Change preposition
at 0,5
thousand
from 1925 to 1975 before growth 12,5
and 11,5 in 2000 respectively, Emily indicates a jump in 1950 and peaked at the highest 13,5 per Change preposition
of 12,5
thousand
in 2000.Submitted by hoangminhnhat150206 on
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