The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line charts below give information about the pattern in current popular both
boys
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boy's
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and
girls's
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girls'
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names in the UK from 1925 to 2000.
It is clear that
there were three names which
was
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were
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the most popular in boys and
girls
. The name that was owned by
the
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apply
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most boys was belonged to Daniel and
in
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for
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girls
was Emily. In popular
boy's
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boys'
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names,
although
Daniel was the highest and peaked
four
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at four
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per
thousand
at
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in
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1925
then
showed a
dramatical
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dramatic
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increase to 12 per
thousand
in 1975, it had a small decrease in 2000 by one per
thousand
.
Whereas
Alexander was launched
in
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at
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one per
thousand
and just had an
enormously jumped
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enormous jump
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when reached 10 per
thousand
between 1975 and 2000, Oliver illustrated fluctuation after a rose by five per
thousand
in 1950, it dropped
equal
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equally
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the upper figures before rocked more than Daniel with 13 per
thousand
in 2000. In
girls
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girls,
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while
Sophia and Isabella had a similar trend
along with
the same number when maintained
0,5
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at 0,5
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per
thousand
from 1925 to 1975 before growth
12,5
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of 12,5
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and 11,5 in 2000 respectively, Emily indicates a jump in 1950 and peaked at the highest 13,5 per
thousand
in 2000.
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