Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sport clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the argument from both aspect of this possible debate, and reach conclusion.

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worker

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subsidized

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to participate in gyms and

sport area

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, they claim that

this

will make their workforce healthier and

therefore

effective at

accupation

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occupation

. Whilst

other

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believe that, there aren’t

advantage

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in

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matter. In

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essay

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I am going to examine

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question from both points of view and give my own opinion on the matter. On the one hand, some people reasonably argue that

sport

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activity is not

priority

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for all workers, there are believe that there are many noticeable issues in their work and

life

and should be

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this

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matters.

Thus

, they prefer to acquire some financial reward

such

as bonuses as

incentive

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. They admit that

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kind of

privileges

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let

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them to choose freely what activity they tend to do.

On the other hand

, other

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of people claim that

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kind of

perks

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have

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a lot of merits for

staffs

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, they insist that

healthy

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life style

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play

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crucial

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role in our

life

there for do

regularly

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exercise

reduce

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our anxiety and stress in daily activity and

this

matter

lead

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to increase quality our performance at the work environment

therefor

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output of companies or organization rise.

To conclude

, in my view employer should pay attention to worker’s

requirement

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precisely and evaluate their needs sufficiently and

according to

them give them perks or financial

reward

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and beside them pay attention to

enhance

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healthy

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the healthy

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life style

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lifestyle

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of workers.