The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
The column chart illustrates how many paid workers and volunteers worked in 4 different roles in a city in Australia in the year 2015.
Overall
, the number
of volunteers who served as a coach, a therapist or other sections was more than paid workers except for referee
occupation. Furthermore
, volunteer coaches was
the highest population. The Change the verb form
were
number
of people
who earned money and worked in therapist
and Correct article usage
the therapist
referee
sectors were
equal.
It can be seen that volunteering in Correct subject-verb agreement
was
coaching
section had the most popularity with nearly 74 participants. Correct article usage
the coaching
Moreover
, people
who were employed as volunteers in
Change preposition
as
referee
were the smallest Fix the agreement mistake
referees
number
at approximately 30 individuals. The number
of people
who were occupied in therapist
were equal to Fix the agreement mistake
therapists
referee
sectors at 40 Correct article usage
the referee
people
. It is worth mentioning that volunteering in other section category
was the second largest group with 60 participants. Fix the agreement mistake
categories
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, referee, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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