The graphs below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years
The pie charts compare a variety of
energy
production methods namely, Coal, Gas
, Petro
, Nuclear, and others, in France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, It is evident that Gas
and Coal and Petro
usage for Energy
production are 3 highest proportions in both years. Furthermore
, utilization
of Nuclear and Other types of Correct article usage
the utilization
energy
supplies significantly increased, Petro
, meanwhile, saw a decline in its contribute
to Replace the word
contribution
Energy
production.
Coal and Gas
, with 29.80% and 29.63% respectively, are
Wrong verb form
were
top ranked
in Add a hyphen
top-ranked
this
department in 1995, closely followed by petro
( 29.27 percent). the
Correct article usage
apply
Gas
and Coal possess
about the same percentage in 2005, Wrong verb form
possessed
while
for Petro
, the figure decreased by some 10 percent
by 2005.
6.40% and 4.90% of Change the spelling
per cent
Energy
produces
in France in 1995, came from Nuclear and Other means respectively, Wrong verb form
produced
this
Number almost doubled for both categories in 2005, resulting in the figure being 10.10% for nuclear and 9.10% for other.Submitted by soroush.nezami on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas, petro with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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