The bar chart below shows shares of expenditure for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart above demonstrates how expenditures
are
spent for the Wrong verb form
were
most
five important categories in 5 different Correct quantifier usage
apply
countries
in 2009. Overall
,housing, food
and transportation
witnessed high percentages, while
health care and clothing experienced lower proportions.
Housing, food
and transportation
accounted for about 60% of the spending of the country.Firstly
,in 2009, for construction, the US spent the most, which was about
more than 25% and Rephrase
apply
investing
the least was Canada, which Wrong verb form
invested
was
only Unnecessary verb
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about
more than 20%. Change preposition
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Next,
about food
, the proportion of Japan was the highest with the number of nearly 25%, in contrast
, the US spender only devoted nearly 15% for
the Change preposition
to
food
industry. Thirdly
, in transportation
, of 4 countries
, the US was the most likely to allocate their money with the
percentage of about 20%, and Correct article usage
a
conversely
, Japan only wanted to put in the transportation
part 10% of the total of their spending.
The other 2 main sections, which were health care and clothing, displaced about 10% in
the expenditures. In 2009, for the hospitality and medicine industry, people in the US spent more than 5% of their Change preposition
of
fund
, which is the highest rate of the 4 Fix the agreement mistake
funds
countries
, and different from the US, the UK only wanted to spend about 3% on this
part. Finally
, for clothing, there were 2 countries
that showed the highest percents
, which were Canada and the US, with more than 5% of their spending, and distinctively, the US and Japan gave up less than 5% of their moneyReplace the word
percentages
in
.Change preposition
apply
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