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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write a report summarizing the information. Select and describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The line chart below shows the per capita meat consumption in four different countries (USA, UK, Brazil, and India) from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in European Countries from 1979 to 2004.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write a report summarizing the information. Select and describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The line chart below shows the per capita meat consumption in four different countries (USA, UK, Brazil, and India) from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in European Countries from 1979 to 2004.
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The
consumption
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 of 4 different types of meats in European Countries from 1979 to 2004 is represented in the following line
graph
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.
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, the line
graph
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 provides the main fish and meat
consumption
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 throughout the years, highlighting the lowest
consumption
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with
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of
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 fish and the highest
with
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of
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 chicken. The
graph
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also
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 states the decrease in
consumption
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 of beef and lamb throughout time. It is clear from the
graph
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 that chicken is the meat with the highest
consumption
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 level with a constant increase over the years from 1979 until 2004. Since the year
1990
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1990,
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 there has been a dramatic decrease in the
consumption
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 of beef and lamb. The only product
who
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that
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 has maintained a steady
consumption
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 is fish staying in the range of 50
grams
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 per person per week. The highest peak was observed at 230
grams
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 of
consumption
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 per person per week of beef. The trend remained relatively steady for all products from 1979 until 1989 staying within the range of 50 to 200
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 per person per week.
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, it is important to note that the product of Chicken and lamb both started at the
consumption
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 of 150
grams
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 and by the year
of
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apply
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2004 ended in
complete
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 opposite numbers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, graph, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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