The pie charts give information about the proportion males and females in employment in six categories divided into manual and non-manual occupations
The pie charts show data about the rate of different
gender
in different 6 Fix the agreement mistake
genders
type
of work Change to a plural noun
types
include
manual and non-manual. Wrong verb form
including
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of general labourers, craft or similar are almost same for female and male, meanwhile, there is
no big differences between Change the verb form
are
man
and female rate about this
categories.
It is clearly observed that the proportion of female
who work clerical or related is more than five times Fix the agreement mistake
females
than
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that
man's
. Change noun form
of men
However
, the total percentage of manual jobs shows that man
prefer these Fix the agreement mistake
men
job
more than Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
woman
by 62%, Fix the agreement mistake
women
33
% respectively. So Correct word choice
and 33
rate
of clerical or related is well over than Add an article
the rate
man
for women. Fix the agreement mistake
men
Moreover
, other non-manual for woman
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women
is
slightly more than Correct subject-verb agreement
are
man
like 3%. Fix the agreement mistake
men
On the other hand
, managerial and professional is the most popular job for man
because of the highest percentage(36%).
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men
To sum up
, there is no balance between gender and type of job preferences by
given information.Change preposition
apply
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