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The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar charts compare the proportion of the average household expenditure on
food
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 over the period of 30 years, and the line graph illustrates how many
meals
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 have been eaten compared to fast
food
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 and other
food
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 from 1970 to 2000.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 significantly more people prefer cooking at home to dining out. We can
also
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 see that the number of fast
food
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meals
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 experienced a dramatic increase between 1970 and 2000.
According to
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 the bar charts, in 1790, home cooking was by far the most for
food
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 budget, accounting for 90%,
while
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 decreasing by 40% approximately in 2000.
However
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, the percentage of spending on
restaurants
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 witnessed a stable growth from a mere 10% to 50%. Looking at the number of
meals
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, in 1970, representing the same figure roughly 20 times per year in junk
food
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restaurants
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 and general
restaurants
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. Having junk
meals
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 service dramatically increased to approximately 90 times a year in 2000,
whereas
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meals
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 at general
restaurants
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 were half from just under 50 times a year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, meals, restaurants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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