The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The given visual illustrates some information about the number who graduated and postgraduate working after college in the UK in 2008. The biggest amount in both of these groups was

further

study in

this

year. The number of part-time work in postgraduate students was almost 2500, but

this

amount in

graduated

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graduates

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was almost 18000.

Also

unemployment in postgraduate groups and

graduated

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graduates

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had a big ranking followed by 1,625 and 16,235. , which means that the difference between them was huge.The littlest amount was for voluntary work in postgraduate by 345 students and 3,500 members in graduate students. In

general

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general,

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the number of graduates in all the categories was more than the other group of

student

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students

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and

both

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neither

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of

this

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these

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groups

didn`t have

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had

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any persons who

work

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worked

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in a full-time job.