The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given visual illustrates some information about the number who graduated and postgraduate working after college in the UK in 2008. The biggest amount in both of these groups was
further
study in this
year.
The number of part-time work in postgraduate students was almost 2500, but this
amount in graduated
was almost 18000. Replace the word
graduates
Also
unemployment in postgraduate groups and graduated
had a big ranking followed by 1,625 and 16,235. , which means that the difference between them was huge.The littlest amount was for voluntary work in postgraduate by 345 students and 3,500 members in graduate students.
In Replace the word
graduates
general
the number of graduates in all the categories was more than the other group of Add a comma
general,
student
and Fix the agreement mistake
students
both
of Correct determiner usage
neither
this
groups Correct determiner usage
these
didn`t have
any persons who Wrong verb form
had
work
in a full-time job.Wrong verb form
worked
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