The line graph below displays the unemployment rates among university graduates in Australia, Canada, Germany, and Japan from 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below displays the unemployment rates among university graduates in Australia, Canada, Germany, and Japan from 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
unemployment
rates
among academically educated individuals in three European countries—
Spain
, Italy, and
Germany
—over a 15-year
period
starting from 1991.
Overall
,
Spain
consistently had the highest
unemployment
rate for most of the
period
, except for a two-year exception.
In contrast
,
Germany
maintained the lowest
unemployment
rate throughout the
period
. Despite fluctuations in
unemployment
rates
, the rankings of the countries remained mostly unchanged from 1991 to 2004.
However
, in 2004,
Germany
and
Spain
switched places, resulting in
Germany
having the highest
unemployment
rate, followed by
Spain
and Italy. It is notable that each country experienced significant fluctuations over time. Until 1997, all three countries showed a steady increase in
unemployment
rates
, except for
Spain
, which began to decline from 1995. After 1997,
Spain
and Italy saw a decrease in their
rates
,
while
Germany
experienced a sharp increase, allowing it to surpass the other two countries by the end of the
period
.
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