The charts below show the proportions of British students one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the
number
of students in British could speak other languages
in both of
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2000 and 2010. The Remove the comma
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higgher
range in both years was the groups who could speak Correct your spelling
higher
spanish
only.
The Change the capitalization
Spanish
amount
of students who just spoke French was 15 Change the quantifier
number
percent
in 2000, Change the spelling
per cent
also
another
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other
languages
were on the same level with
them. The percentage of Change preposition
as
student
who could speak German only and another language was both 10%, Fix the agreement mistake
students
However
, no other language was 20 in 100 in british
students .
In 2010 Change the capitalization
British
this
amount has cahanged normaly
, The Correct your spelling
changed normally
number
of Spanish only increased to 35%,and French only decreased to 10% even dough
two other Correct your spelling
though
language
up to 15%. The person who Change to a plural noun
languages
were
able to speak Change the verb form
was
another
Correct quantifier usage
other
languages
become more by 20% in 2010. although
the number
of no other languages
fell to 10%.
Generally, the number
of people who could speak German only did not change and was a
like in 2000 and 2010.Correct article usage
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