The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs show the value of
goods
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imported to New Zealand from two different countries,
Japan
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and
Australia
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, over a
ten year
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period. There
appears
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to be two opposing trends displayed on the line graphs. The trend for
Japan
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was downward with the country exporting
goods
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worth 3
billion
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NZ$ in 1994 and 2
billion
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in 2004.
On the other hand
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,
Australia
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exhibited an upward trend, exporting 4
billion
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of
goods
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at the beginning of the period and 8
billion
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at the end
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.
However
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, there was considerable fluctuation for both countries. When looking at imports from
Japan
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we can see that the line graph is dominated by two large peaks in 1999 and 2000 and that between these years New Zealand imported a higher value of
goods
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from
Japan
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than
Australia
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. Imports from
Australia
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also
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fluctuated and they dipped twice.
However
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, the strong recovery in the latter half of the period means they ended up exporting
goods
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worth four times the value of those from
Japan
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.
Overall
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, we can see that imports were far from stable from both countries but that exports from
Japan
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decreased over time and those from
Australia
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increased.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, japan, australia, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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