ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the proportion of staff employed by age in the public sector in the UK in 2015 and 2020.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts introduce the

percentage

of

employees

from different

age

ranges who work in the state segment in the UK in the years 2015 and 2020.

Overall

, about half of the

employees

were at the ages 21-30 and over 50 in the first

year

.

Subsequently

, most of the

employees

in the second

year

were from the

age

of 21-30.

Whereas

, the

percentage

of

employees

under 21 and over 50

reduced

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. In 2015, the

least

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lowest

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proportion of recruitment belonged to the

age

group

of

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under 21 , with 14% .Compared to other groups , the following one is

age

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the age

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group of 41-50 with almost the same

percentage

of

employment

, with a difference of 5 units.

While

the

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most of the

employment

with equal

percentage

were 21-30 and over 50 , with 23% respectively. People aged 31-40

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21% of the whole

workers

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number of workers

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in

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this

year

. In 2020, the

percentage

of young people under 21 and adults over 50 reduced by 2% and 7%.

Also

, people from the

age

of 31-40 witnessed a decrease in

this

period by 10%. Workers in their 20s increased and reached the peak of 33% of

employment

.

Moreover

, the

percentage

of workers who were in the 40s increased and composed 28% of the total

employment

in

this

year

.