The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and all graduates who got full time job after graduating from a university in Australia and also show the average salary of both these types of grads, from 2004 to 2012.

The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and all graduates who got full time job after graduating from a university in Australia and also show the average salary of both these types of grads, from 2004 to 2012.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of both all and only
maths
graduates hired in
full time
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jobs and the table presents the amount of income they get paid in five years with two-year intervals between 2004 to 2012.
Overall
,
it is clear that
maths
graduates are mostly employed as
full
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workers;
besides
, they both earn the same salary until 2008 when
maths
more than others.
To begin
with, the fraction of
maths
employment started at an enormous 80% and shot up to a gigantic 90% in the next two years before continuously sliding and ending at 80% in the final year.
Furthermore
, all graduates began at nearly 65% and surged to a massive 80% in 2008;
consequently
, nosedived to a minimal 65% in 2012. What is interesting to note is that both of them stayed at the same percentage after eight years. On the flip side of the coin, the total salary of the two courses was $41,000 in the first year and inclined to $43,000 in 2006 together.
However
, in 2008, they separated from each other by a significant increase was seen in
maths
subject
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by $7,000
while
others escalated by only $2,000. The trend still
further
widened and ended at $56,000 and $51,000 in 2012 respectively. What is surprising to see is that in the
last
year, the earnings in
maths
were higher all by $5,000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words maths with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rate
  • percentage of graduates
  • full-time job
  • average salary
  • trend analysis
  • comparison
  • unemployment
  • economic conditions
  • graduate population
  • specified period
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