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The chart below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by Canada, UK, USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  write 150 words.

The chart below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by Canada, UK, USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  write 150 words.
#amount #tea #coffee #canada #uk #usa #germany #tonnes #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The bar chart illustrates
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a comparasion
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comparasion
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comparison
in
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of
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 the amount of
tea
 and
coffee
 imported by Four countries in 2007 . The data are
museared
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mustard
 in tonnes.
Overall
, it can be seen that
coffee
 is the most popular in all given countries except The
UK
. The amount of
tea
 and
coffee
 imported by
canada
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Canada
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 and The US
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is sproximetaly
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sproximetaly
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proximately
 the same . One
on
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apply
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hand,
UK
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the UK
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 is the
highest
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apply
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country
in
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with
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 imported
tea
 at 80000 tonnes , Which makes it higher than Garmany by 40000 tonnes. In
constrast
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contrast
, the
UK
lower
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is lower
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 than
German
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Germany
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 in imported
coffee
 at 3000 for
UK
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the UK
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 and 5000 for Garman.
On the Other hand
,the amount of imported
coffee
 in The US and Canada are about 4000 and 3980 respectively .
While
 for
tea
 is around 2100 and 2000 correspondingly.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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