The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line charts illustrate the

popularity

of the three most common names for boys and

girls

in the UK from 1925 to 2000.

Overall

, Daniel was the most popular name for boys,

while

Emily topped the list for

girls

Although

Oliver and Alexander were

also

popular, they did not surpass Daniel.

Similarly

, Sophia and Isabella remained

favored

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names for

girls

but were not as prevalent as Emily. In detail, Daniel was the most commonly used name for boys in 1925, with approximately 4 per

thousand

people choosing it. Its

popularity

surged to about 12 per

thousand

by 1975 before a slight decline to just under 12 per

thousand

in 2000. Oliver showed significant fluctuation: starting at 1 per

thousand

in 1925,

it rose

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to just over 5 per

thousand

in 1950,

plummeted

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to almost zero in 1975, and

then

increased

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sharply to just over 10 per

thousand

by 2000. Alexander remained relatively stable at around 1 per

thousand

from 1925 to 1975 before rising steeply to just under 12 per

thousand

by the end of the period.

Conversely

, Emily consistently gained

popularity

among

girls

. In 1925, around 2 per

thousand

girls

were named Emily, and

this

number grew steadily, reaching just over 10 per

thousand

by 2000. Meanwhile, Sophia and Isabella saw a rise in

popularity

from 1975 onwards, with both names reaching around 10 per

thousand

by 2000.

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